Rough cut 2 Audience feedback.

• Some of the shots are too long, it get's a bit boring.
• The range of shots work well.
• The shot where the girl and boy are on the sofa and they move along it, is really good.
• The shot's need to change due to the change in music. 
• I think the opening's really strong with the different instruments. 
• I'm not too sure about the bit at the start where the main singer says "oh, oh" 

- Declan Prendagast. 

• The new location is alot better, it buts up the music video abit.
• I like the flash back on the girl, when she turns to look at the camera.
• The narrative works well.
• The sped up shots at the bus station works really well, cut inbetween the band playing, it doesn't get boring.
• The shot where the girl is going through the door, it isn't quite matched up quite right.
• Some shots, the boy is looking at the camera and doesn't look right. 
• The lip syncing is alot better. 
• I liked the bike idea, there was just too much of it. I would like to see the bike come back in. 

- Sonal Mistry.

• The start is good with the instruments, but the shots but the location needs to change quicker.
• When the lead singer was on the bike that worked well, only some of the shots lip syncing was not right but I think this idea was good.
• When the boy and girl move up the sofa that's a good technique. 
• The lip syncing is alot better here.
• When there is a flashback of the girl looking back, I dont understand why the filter has changed. 
• The narrative works well. 
• When the singer is at the bus station again another really good shot. 
• I like the hand held camera when the girl is walking away, it's as if we are the eye's of what the guy is seeing, which makes it feel personal. 

- Sam Davies.