Final Cut.

Here is my final cut, after the feedback I have received, I took into account to bring back the bike idea, as it was something to add in so there were lots of different clips going off and the audience didn't get bored. I also added in the shoe Idea, I think it worked really well, and again kept the audience interested. Some people mentioned about when the main singer says "oh, oh" at the start but I quite liked that idea, and I think it was edited properly, so it worked, it was also a bit different and quirky as it jumped. This cut is quite similar then my second draft, although some things have been taken out and added in. I've shortened the narrative by putting the shoe's inbetween. I noticed, when my audience was watching my first draft they got distracted and would not really be watching it, whereas when they watched this cut, they seem alot more interested, as there was a lot more going off. I am really happy with my final cut, although it wasn't my original desire to film what I've filmed but I think this idea is alot better and it relates to the lyric, which my first idea didn't.