- Some nice editing - when they swop instruments.
- Most of the lip syncing are in time but some is not.
- There are a few moments where the actors look directly at the camera removing the audiences viewing of the antic's.
- Actors don't look very enthusiastic.
- I think that the video is currently too much of the same, what do the lyric's of the song link with the video, I don't think there is alot of diversity in shot's mainly close up's or lomgshot.
- Maybe apply some transitions possibly add POV on the bike / establishing shot of the park.
- Need a smoother camera tripod, it's too jerky.
- Improve lip syncing, make sure it's in time.
- The change of instruments is a good idea, keep this idea.
- Keep the shot where the band members are walking past the dungeon tunnel.
- Needs another location.
- The shots are too repetitive.
- Cut the shot at the end with all three band members walking either side of the bike.
- The bike idea is good.
- Some of the shoots need to be smoother.
- The shots get boring and repetitive.
- Maybe go to a different place to film, to make it more exciting.
- Some of the lip syncing is out of time.
- Starting the singing with the main singer on the bike works well.
- The end aswell works well with them all together, with the main singer on the bike.
- When the band are playing thats a nice location.
- Connor Ball.
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